I didn't think i could carry on living without seeing the rejects of the MGS: Flash Collab. You attempts at humour were pitiful and only a small hand full of the animations were well drawn and animated.
you just completly ripped off tankmen, the animation and drawing style was painful to look at, i just can't put into words how awful that was to watch, i can't believe this has recieved such a good score.
most madness style animations turn out awful but this one was pretty decent and more original in its main character. the only thing i think you should do is increase the fps so the movement will look more fluid.
your animation looked great so i hate to bring this up but unfinished work doesn't really belong here, stuff like trailers and unfinished peices are referred to as ng alphas and should be posted on ng.mag(theres a link to it on the nav bar and on the submissions page) aslo, posting on ng.mag may benificial, feedback is usually better there because there are less newbs posting silly unconstructive reviews about how good or bad you are. out of the latest 5 reviews for this piece, there sems to be only one person who gave useful feedback. you asked for suggestions and flash tipsand you mostly got reviews like daeperez's review which just said "nice" , you may get more help on ng.mag.
by the way i think one way you can improve slightly is by adding more tone to the face, the image at the top of the page next to the "watch this movie" link, the girl in the pic only has shadow under her chin, i think it will look better if there was more dark tones on the people, it wil definately bring the quality up to the high stanard of the rest of the animation.
i didn't this at all funny. i thought it was badly animated and it was pixelated. i had to load the video twice because the video stopped on the message before the animation. and finally your sarcasm is pretty lame. you sounded like a kid who watches stand up comedy and thinks "hey i can do that". well quite frankly, you can't. at least come up with some funny jokes instead of just ripping into the guy with bad voice imatations.
bad no. 1- bad choice of colours, the black text and the dark background was very difficult to see.
bad no. 2- too short and not enough elaboration on the meaning, although i did understand the point i think you were trying to get across.
bad no. 3- i haven't seen this before, but if i got blammed or isn't at all different from the last time you posted it on your other account, it should not have been posted again. not unless it was absoloutely amazing and you wanted people to know you did this in the future when people are viewing any newer work you may post.
professionly created and profressionally developed but not by you.this is a near copy from a tutorial i used to create my snake games. in fact i believe you just dowloaded the example file and changed it slightly.
we need more animaions on deforestation, the environment is a big issue that might not affect us directly now but it will in the future. We're destroying the environment but not the planet, the Earth will surive global warming, we won't.
i think it's great someone is involving that issue in thier flash and i hope this animation will inspire others too.
thanx yes i planet is dieing they say well i think its us were realy killing but what can you do you tell than the truth and they lie and go into denial oh well theyll be sorry
thetoughfairy
All 50 flash Reviews
Rated 0 / 5 stars July 8, 2008
wow, thank you!
I didn't think i could carry on living without seeing the rejects of the MGS: Flash Collab. You attempts at humour were pitiful and only a small hand full of the animations were well drawn and animated.
Rated 1 / 5 stars May 29, 2008
this was terrible
you just completly ripped off tankmen, the animation and drawing style was painful to look at, i just can't put into words how awful that was to watch, i can't believe this has recieved such a good score.
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 21, 2008
not bad..
most madness style animations turn out awful but this one was pretty decent and more original in its main character. the only thing i think you should do is increase the fps so the movement will look more fluid.
Rated 5 / 5 stars May 18, 2008
i dont understand...
how the hell does this series not have its own section in the series page on this site?
Rated 5 / 5 stars April 27, 2008
good, but doesn't belong here.
your animation looked great so i hate to bring this up but unfinished work doesn't really belong here, stuff like trailers and unfinished peices are referred to as ng alphas and should be posted on ng.mag(theres a link to it on the nav bar and on the submissions page) aslo, posting on ng.mag may benificial, feedback is usually better there because there are less newbs posting silly unconstructive reviews about how good or bad you are. out of the latest 5 reviews for this piece, there sems to be only one person who gave useful feedback. you asked for suggestions and flash tipsand you mostly got reviews like daeperez's review which just said "nice" , you may get more help on ng.mag.
by the way i think one way you can improve slightly is by adding more tone to the face, the image at the top of the page next to the "watch this movie" link, the girl in the pic only has shadow under her chin, i think it will look better if there was more dark tones on the people, it wil definately bring the quality up to the high stanard of the rest of the animation.
Rated 0.5 / 5 stars April 25, 2008
boring.
i didn't this at all funny. i thought it was badly animated and it was pixelated. i had to load the video twice because the video stopped on the message before the animation. and finally your sarcasm is pretty lame. you sounded like a kid who watches stand up comedy and thinks "hey i can do that". well quite frankly, you can't. at least come up with some funny jokes instead of just ripping into the guy with bad voice imatations.
Rated 1.5 / 5 stars March 13, 2008
bad, bad, bad.
bad no. 1- bad choice of colours, the black text and the dark background was very difficult to see.
bad no. 2- too short and not enough elaboration on the meaning, although i did understand the point i think you were trying to get across.
bad no. 3- i haven't seen this before, but if i got blammed or isn't at all different from the last time you posted it on your other account, it should not have been posted again. not unless it was absoloutely amazing and you wanted people to know you did this in the future when people are viewing any newer work you may post.
Rated 5 / 5 stars February 24, 2008
i hate indie kids...
i hate them all, how is it indie when you're just like every other indie kid, i love this animation though
Rated 0 / 5 stars January 24, 2008
professionally created
professionly created and profressionally developed but not by you.this is a near copy from a tutorial i used to create my snake games. in fact i believe you just dowloaded the example file and changed it slightly.
Rated 5 / 5 stars January 15, 2008
great.
we need more animaions on deforestation, the environment is a big issue that might not affect us directly now but it will in the future. We're destroying the environment but not the planet, the Earth will surive global warming, we won't.
i think it's great someone is involving that issue in thier flash and i hope this animation will inspire others too.
thanx yes i planet is dieing they say well i think its us were realy killing but what can you do you tell than the truth and they lie and go into denial oh well theyll be sorry